Good Sh**

I love the instrumentals, the "high voice" and beats in the background. Did you write it all yourself? It all flows pretty damn well. The rapping is good for your first time. With a better mic... who knows what could happen?

A One Course Meal

This was pretty great for what it is, but I was craving a melody change or a half time section or sumthin to mix it up a little bit. Three and a half minutes of the same melody gets old.