I love the instrumentals, the "high voice" and beats in the background. Did you write it all yourself? It all flows pretty damn well. The rapping is good for your first time. With a better mic... who knows what could happen?
thanks, only the first verse was a first attempt. one love
A One Course Meal
This was pretty great for what it is, but I was craving a melody change or a half time section or sumthin to mix it up a little bit. Three and a half minutes of the same melody gets old.
With more practice, timing, and inspiration you're the next Oscar Peterson
I'm not sure if that's a complement or not, but ill definitely keep practicing...
I would dock a point for the quality of the recording, but I know it ain't ur fault. Nice work! At first I was a little worried about the singing, but it got better later in the song.
Awesome piece, love the harmonies.
dude you really know what you're doing. I'd love to see more peeps on Newgrounds with your skill level and understanding of music
lol that was very nostalgic. nice work.
You know what would really add some extra flavor to this song? Sleigh bells. That'd be pretty sweet.
death by instrumentation
You had the right idea...
But you need better instruments, better mixing, and better filters. Also, a few notes are off.
Dude! Nice work! Great sound, extremely epic. I could use some more variation in the lead guitar, a solo?, and maybe a 'verse'? I dunno, definitely cool though.
I have no idea what that was supposed to be, lol
its supposed to sound like hammers making sweet love to eye sockets
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